Youthful Exuberance

Youthful Exuberance

A Poem by Zan
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I wrote this for a class project and it had to be a certain length. I think it loses something after the first 12 lines - should I stop it there?

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Tumultuous wheat's influxes rapid
yet so harmonious
beautiful chaotic dance.

The heavens: azure, benign, pervading
cotton clouds encompass Earth
smokey gateways

Infinite potential smiles down; sun rays
caressing wind kisses skin
stirs flighty thoughts

Velvet soft stallion; muscles rippling flex
his thundering hooves beat springy loam
youth's jubilation

Complete euphoria in gate like flight
sloping curve - Earth's breast beneath feet
electric day

Nothing but chance, veins thrilling, excited
sanctity of peace in movement
beyond compare

Youthful exuberance, innocent fog
pain the world in one's own colours
captivating

Power the world with energy, prowess
of children's radiant brilliance
grounded flight.

© 2013 Zan


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There is a certain otherworldliness to it. The second to last stanzas was one of my favorites, so while you're the author, as a reader, I didn't feel any distinct loss after the first 12 lines ended.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zan

11 Years Ago

Thanks :) my family hated it... so its good to know that others think its alright

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