Youthful ExuberanceA Poem by ZanI wrote this for a class project and it had to be a certain length. I think it loses something after the first 12 lines - should I stop it there?
Tumultuous wheat's influxes rapid
yet so harmonious beautiful chaotic dance. The heavens: azure, benign, pervading cotton clouds encompass Earth smokey gateways Infinite potential smiles down; sun rays caressing wind kisses skin stirs flighty thoughts Velvet soft stallion; muscles rippling flex his thundering hooves beat springy loam youth's jubilation Complete euphoria in gate like flight sloping curve - Earth's breast beneath feet electric day Nothing but chance, veins thrilling, excited sanctity of peace in movement beyond compare Youthful exuberance, innocent fog pain the world in one's own colours captivating Power the world with energy, prowess of children's radiant brilliance grounded flight.
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1 Review Added on August 30, 2013 Last Updated on August 30, 2013 AuthorZanLondon, Ontario, CanadaAbout*** first - business: i'm currently looking for a critique partner for two novels - if anyone has any work to exchange that would be greatly appreciated **** What can I say that's any different tha.. more..Writing
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