Crumbling Fate

I feel it..

Falling

Crashing inside

 

Thoughts of twirling despair

Fill my mind like a sink overflowing

 

Pain tormenting

Reminding

That everythign isn't as pretty as it seems

That everyone has something to hide

 

I can feel it

Suffocating me

Killing whats left

Numbing me

 

Distant voices

Cry out

Hushed by the cold winds of depression

Knocking me down

Breathless

 

It all twirls around

Like a water going down a drain

 

Each passing moment

I feel like I'm Slipping

Away from it all

Meaning

Understanding

Reason

Desire

Hope

Passion

Love..

 

Thoughts of loneliness plague my mind

Like a new viral outbreak that has no cure

Eating away at my insides

Rotting me from the inside out

 

Filling my mind with hate and anger

Thoughts race around

Paranoia flares

 

Causing me to wonder

What everyone's hiding away

 

Thoughts of false good hood

Remorse

I can feel it

Flowing

Twirling

 

I can feel that I’m being held in the shadows

I can feel the darkness crawl through me

Consuming me

 

Making me

Numb

Cold

Angry

 

Soon

It'll all just wither away

Like a dieing rose

 

Soon, my last petal of feeling will fall

Then I'll be nothing more than dirt.

 

Reviews

[Jessica M.]

Slipping away from love.
petal of feeling.
Nice metaphors ^^
I hope you find some faith in humanity there,
there are people out there who genuinely care,
who genuinely listen.
Don't let go, there is still a beautiful life ahead of you.
:D