Strike

Love will strike, but even if it doesn't last, it will once more.

 

Strike

The strike of love,

Hits you once,

And you’re falling,

Falling so hard,

For that one,

That one and that only,

That only person,

Who matters,

Matters most,

In this life you have.

 

The strike of loss,

Hits you once,

And you’re falling,

Falling so hard,

Into depression,

For loss of that one,

That one and that only,

That only person,

Who mattered,

Mattered the most,

In that life you once had.

 

The strike of love,

Hits you twice,

And you’re falling,

Falling so hard,

For this one,

This one and this only,

This only person,

Who matters now,

Now matters most,

In this life you now have.

Author's Note

Sorry if it's bad.

Reviews

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Hey, don't apologize for what you've written. Either way, people are going to criticize you in life. You, yourself, should at least stand by your work, even if you don't believe in it. lol. Didn't mean to sound preachy...

I think you've done a great job in expressing yourself. You sent a clear message through your three verses, and there was a unique rhythm to it.
Keep it up!