Loneliness

Loneliness

A Poem by Zall
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Loneliness, is an emotion that everybody feels at one point or another in this life.

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Loneliness
Loneliness,
A strong emotion,
Living inside,
Inside of me,
When friends surround,
The feeling is sound,
I’m not proud,
Of this feeling,
This feeling of being alone,
Alone in a group,
Alone when friends are here,
Alone when family is near,
Loneliness,
A strong emotion,
Living inside,
Inside of me.

© 2009 Zall


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Zall
Sorry if it's bad.

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It's not bad. You've captured loneliness very well. I happen to be a victim of loneliness too often.

Perhaps a little more detail and avoidance of cliche's would empower the poem more.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Zall
Zall

Twin Cities, MN



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