Forest of rust

A strange poem

Forests of rust, fields of lead
Soon enough you'll all be dead
Nothing moves nothing changes
It never even rearranges

Metal stacked towards the sky
Someday it will all die
Crying saints litter the floor
Soon their tears will be no more

Stretching outwards from the center
No one will ever enter
The forest of rust so dark so cold
Forests of rust thousands of years old

The forest glows red in the light
This is where we will start a fight
This is where we will pick our battle
We will no longer live as Cattle

We shall win our freedom from these people
Futures will come and the heap will
Stack on high with bodies and bangles
People left up in the tangles

The forest of rust will watch it all
And forever more it will stand tall
Seen to much with its silent gaze
One more it shall melt into the haze

Author's Note

I really don't know what happened with this, I just went with the flow of the writing.

Reviews

[Aggie Skeleton]

City to forest, intresting veiw. I thought it was more about global warming and how humanity is destroying all thats good. But then again I am just a tree hugger.

[deeps]

This is a very well written write here.
Like the rhyme scheme

[Becca*Type2012]

I like the comparison of a city to a forrest. Very creative. I also like the rhyme skeme, since I usually don't rhyme I appreciate the people that do yhme with their work.

[Paege]

I really like the concept here. It reminds me of a poem about the future when all of humanity has moved on but the rusty remains of our old unfriendly buildings still stand. Very good write, i like the rhyme scheme. (sorry i suck at spelling, :P)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much, the rhyming is great:)

[Holly-Marie]

I loved this =)
Dark and different. It had a wonderful flow and was really unique.

[Mark]

Forest of rust is scary and weird. The weirdest image I have had in a while. Thanks I guess.

[Frantzuu]

You did a great job with the flow, awesome write.