Scream

Scream

A Poem by aaaa
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Scream and run away now

"
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

Run down the corridors
Run and hide away
Run around the corner
There is no other way

Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

You find the door it locked
You can't find a way in
You look around and panic
You start to give in

Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

It rounds the corner
Red eyes and mad
You wish you had never
Given in and had...

Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

Bought the house
Bought the lot
Bought the town
Put the key in the lock

Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

Opened to your doom
Found that inside
Something was sleeping
Something to hide

Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

You found it in the basement
All under the floor boards
Curled up and sleeping
Huddled on all fours

Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away

It opened it's eyes
You screamed and began to run
It followed you slowly
Otherwise it wouldn't be fun

© 2010 aaaa


Author's Note

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Scream... and run away

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This is a really good poem. I'm really tempted to ask if you've tried puting a melody to it though cause the repitition of "Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away
Scream and run away now
Scream scream and run away"
could be a chorus. Don't get me wrong though it would beamasing if a song but it's still awesome as a poem.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Good repitition, my crazy mind was picturing evrey bit of it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lolol... beautiful fun ... better run then cos' it just brought a big grin to my face ? love the idea of poking fun at fears in friendly manner like this ... :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this. It leaves some things open to interpretation and lets readers create their own 'monster' or 'fear', what they are running from. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the repetition here. It's haunting and it easily draws you in. Nice piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 4, 2010
Last Updated on April 4, 2010
Tags: scream, bones, deaht, skeleton, skull, pain, fire, blood, metal

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