Oh the Obscurity

I want to watch you crumble...

The look in your eyes

It’s sickening

I long to see that smile on your face

Break away along with your soul

 

I see you melting

Your skin peeling away slowly

And curling around what’s left of your bones

Yet you’re still smiling

 

I see you burning

The flames of Hell licking away at your body

And devouring you whole

Yet you’re still smiling

 

I see you drowning

The poison of water infecting your blood

And choking away your last breath

Yet you’re still smiling

 

I see you dying

Slain by my own hands

And lying on the ground in a pool of your own blood

And yet, you’re still smiling

 

If I could kill your arrogance

With the hands of physical Death

I’m sure you realize

I would have done it by now

 

But I want to kill your wicked soul

And the one thing you have left

So watch me as your ego crumbles

Because I’ll by smiling this time

 

Oh my, the Obscurity

Author's Note

Inspired by the song Obscure by Dir en Grey.

Reviews

[Aiden- Aiko- Kiyomi]

*Hallelujah chorus*. That was beautiful. You got the emotion of the song and put it into your own words. I am soooo proud of you. The force is definitely with you... haha had to be a nerd for a bit. This was definitely a wonderful piece. I wish you luck in the competition.