And I...

A dream...A dream I wish to have again.

Shadows play
In moonlit night
And we
We howl our songs

And little bugs
Alight
Abright
Like many specks
Of stars above

So much freedom
So much love
All around
And I cannot help
But run

And jump and play
with denmates
who nip and run
And I chase
Through the wood

Than I jump
And tackle
And we roll
Laughing

Than we stop
And I'm on top
And I look into her eyes
Only then I realize that she
Is a she!

And I stare
And she turns her head
A smile on her and a blush
Barely visible beneath
Her fur...

And than an urge
Comes to me
So natural
And I lean down
And lick her cheek

And she looks up at me
in surprise
And I smile
And nuzzle her

Than I wake
And I look
Out the window
At the full moon
And I...

Reviews

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I really really like the story here!! Will you do another poem to complete it? If you have another dream that is:) I love how you're mind has conjured the self image of a wolf, and how you find another wolf like you, who just so happens to be female. Btw, a male wolf nuzzling a female wolf in nature generally means that he's chosen her as his. Just in case you didn't know... Anyway, a strangely beautiful dream:) It seems to represent letting the real you out:)

[Rekain]

Yes, I'm aware of what it means. Not sure if it's a completable story. At least not in poets form. Maybe as an actual story...maybe.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

It really doesn't feel complete to me, I feel you could add so much more to it... Maybe that's just with the way you ended it. That last line really makes you wonder what happens next...

[Ees]

I like your word choices and your flow in this poem.
I love the "howl" in your first stanza. It draws me in and calls me into continuing my reading of your work. Your first stanza makes me think of mysterious and beautiful nights.
There is a very child-like quality to this poem. Not in the writing ability, but in a good way, in the way of the spirit.
I like the story bit
and that magical personification.
You really did a nice job with this!

[Wolfwind]

Very powerful with a great mystical feeling to it. I loved the flow of the piece and the description was nicely even so that the images were clear, with enough room for the reader to filling in the colors. nicely crafted!

Aaron

[CookieDough]

It was a nice one. I love romance poems!