Valentines: Good, Bad, Neutral.

Valentines

A day of love

to get together

Like two white doves

But all alone

Am I this day

What care I

What some say?

Valentine

I have none

Heartache

I'm too numb

One and two

together

In each others arms

forever

Hate this day

no soft chords

What care I?

no gentle words

I've shut down

Again, again

Like the moon

first wax, than wane

Reviews

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Ok, I love the wording you've used here, and I have to admit, the poem is good, but you're never alone on Valentines Day. You always have your freinds and family, there is always someone out there that loves you. Never let yourself believe that you are not loved because it's not true at all. Anyway, good work:)

[Rekain]

Thanks, I'll...think about it. The day started bad anyways so maybe I'm just a bit biased but...ah, what am I saying...well it doesn't matter now, the day is done and gone and I have nothing more to say of it, but...thanks... for the review..

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Well, just because the day is done and gone does not mean the idea is. Your welcome for the review, but I would like to know what else youwere going to say...

[Rekain]

Some things are better left unsaid. Besides, everybody has their secrets, trying to find them out is what makes life fun.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Grrrrrrrrr