What Rhymes with Limes?

A sporadic, yet well emotionally placed piece. In my own opinion, of myself...wtf?

I need a spur, a spark, to ignite the night sky.

A fear of company, but it's worst when I'm lonely.

Does that make sense Mr. Psychiatrist?

Seven years of sessions just made me cynical and pissed.

If you believe it, I'm over it.  I just copy them now.

Except I have no piece of paper, saying I can figure you out.

Evasion is the only answer to invasion of your brain,

and it's creeping' me out, the "brave" and the "stout".

I tremble like a child without warmth or the taste of water in his mouth.

Look at me now.  I said look at me now. 

I'm a shroud, hopefully a figment.  

So finite as all other things on this planet.

I got a bottle of scotch, and a kid to watch.

This is why I have no train of thought.  

Author's Note

A decent read. Please give feedback and check out my other shit.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing logical rhymes with limes. It is summer time. Young folks have no passion for words on a warm day. I never could write when the sun was out and opportunity to enjoy the summer. I told a lot of writers. Hard to get reviews during the summer. That is a good thing. Need to enjoy life. If desperate. Always Cohen, Collins and Dylan. A old Johnny Cash make me sad and want to write something. A interesting poem.
Coyote

[Brook Hughes]

Very interesting... not sure what the title has to do wit da poem tho. But i love the first line... I need a spur, a spark, to ignite the night sky. But I prefer night to day to be honest. The last two lines are pretty funny... reminds me of the movie bad babysitter. lolz:) keep up the good work:)

[silentpoet]

nice poem

[Seanne Tholltree]

nice poem

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is like a completely abstract writing... Like the flow in this... Great job..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

like a scalpel easing the layers off to commit the sensibility of sane in sameness~ wild pain pouring~ sharp sharp slip of the mental knife~

[Ruth]

Oh wow! I like the abstract quality to this piece! Such depth and yet the title throws lol Beautifully conveyed love! xx

[Tasha]

I liked it a lot, I really liked the end. Great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra