Hoodlum Sons

Hoodlum Sons

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
"

About me and my friend.

"
It's so hard to make things clear,
When you can't even hear me out.
Cause the bass is up to god damn loud.

It's everything I feared...
The evening took us over.
And corrupted us...
Acting like gangsters with Range Rovers.



But then they came, to play the game.
What do I say?  Only: "okay".
Get in the Green Dragon, and relive its name.
Driving down my street, headed toward main.
Picking up my number one homie,
I see a couple plastics comin' straight for me.
I say "Put on yo lay face, be forward but be grace."
Even if he didn't understand, Dan soon got with the plan.
We had five girls at our new apartment, man.

I say, so many things,
It's lame, my lyrics stink,
No shame, back to the creek.
To relive that horrible memory...

Panning out the scene, I see me,
Alone on the hill crest,
Waiting for my secret.
To appear from the darkness,
And take me away from this...

Snap, snap, snap,
Wake, wake the f**k up Zack.

© 2011 Zackery Alan Daley


Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
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This is like a stunning journey through the mind of the sleeper... beating out rhythmic like a song, you see the world unfold and call for that help in darkness waking. Brilliant twists.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wildly relevant spoken word crazy rhythmic pops down the page~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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