What Do Scorned Lovers Do?

What Do Scorned Lovers Do?

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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One of my more recent works.

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She looks like s**t.
And that's not half of it.
Your eyes are gray,
But they use to be green...
What happened to the smile?
The weight?

Should I wait for a while?
I've got crosses and stakes,
And less than minimum wage.
Great...

You lost your touch,
All you are is lust,
Face it, you want me back,
But you can't have that.

Go use another needle,
Rail another pill,
Swallow all the water,
And stumble till you're still.
Don't wake up this time,
It's what you always say,
Since when is love a crime,
And alone in May.

Stay for the warmth,
Left me cause you loved me?
We could have made history!
I don't need meth baby...
See you after eternity.

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley


Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
Describing my utter disappointment and frustration for an ex of mine. Sad days when girls go that way...

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It is terrible what drugs can do. I lost four brother's to drugs addiction. Bad way to die. A sad poem. Hard to stop someone going down hell highway. Usual death is the end. A very good ending to a poem of sadness and disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yes i think everyone goes through that kind of sadness.... for some people it takes years to get over the heartbreak.
good poem though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As I keep reading the works you write, they make me wonder how old you truly are.......not chronologically, but by soul. You have seemed to have lived quite a long time my dear with all of the things that have occurred within this life to you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad days indeed~ raw yet with a pulse of care beating inside your expressions~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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