Revengica

A good poem I wrote recently. Thought you might like it.

I saw my soul in a big black hole,
On the back of your touch screen telephone.
Oh?
What did I say?
You had some family problems today?
Hey. That doesn't mean I'm game.
Hey. I'll never play that game again.
Erased you from memory,
You're far from a hook to me,
Unless of course you mean,
Your at the bottom of the sea.

I dreaded this day would come.
It was a whole lot of trouble,
But the deed is done.

Jaded and faded,
My heart invaded, created,
A whole new game with a whole lot of players.

Author's Note

A good poem I wrote recently. Thought you might like it. The blue stripe represents a local officer who was murdered near the Arizona Utah border. The killer is still on the loose. Google it.

Reviews

[loowzerX]

nice write!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the human soul colliding with techno strides through a framework of a world where nothing seems real anymore~
your rhythm moves with ease inclined toward a deeper beat pulled through the composition~
feels like music~

[David W Moore III]

Loved the rhythm. You did a great job of showing emotion without overdoing it. Nice piece.