I Think I Saw You In My Sleep

Self reflective verbiage. Inconsistent vernacular. Music.

Infectious Texas, it isn't I you should be worried about.
The past is a fire, and who hasn't been burned by it?
I guess I wasn't quite sure how to go about you...
Just a reflection of ghostly your presence made me tense.
Infatuation and ignorance of reciprocation seemed to make sense.

I laid the wire, I paid the piper, I climbed a top that spire.  
Precious pebble your sacred geometry has flawed.
Is this what changed the way you thought of me?
Oh please, just don't think about us.
You weren't even close to enough.

Author's Note

random words of lyrics of mine

Reviews

[MichaelsLyric.com]

Sincere reflections of past relationship, with a touch of resentment. That is what I am getting from this piece. I didn't completely understand the reference to the precious stone, but I did feel its general emotion. Pretty decent write. Thank you for sharing.

[Ronie Singson]

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[Ronie Singson]

Its nice ;)
Read mine xx Hihi.
Just take a look on my writing please.

[ZackOfBridge]

The first line set the tone for the poem well, really good work. I'm not sure exactly what it means, but that is most poetry to me, I enjoyed it though, it flows well

[Ronie Singson]

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[Misty Blue Eyes]

i like how you put a past relationship into this poem, very good keep writing

[Ronie Singson]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/itsroniesingson/1294426/