Revenge Road SLC#1A Story by Zack PearceRevenge leads a man to make a fatal mistakeThe tire tracks stood out on the gravel road like little
neon signs saying “we went this way, come get us”. The four-wheel drive Tom was
driving barely fit on the road, its tires tearing up the gravel as he hit
110km/ph. “those b******s can’t be to faraway” He thought, Jenny. Oh poor Jenny.
she had still been warm. He blinked the tears away, there would be time for grief
later for now he let rage take over. He reached across the seat and checked the
12 gauge was loaded. The truck bounced as he hit a massive ditch that stretched
the width of the road. the tire tracks faded as the road went from gravel to
tarmac. It didn’t matter though, the road continued straight ahead for miles
with only a few turn offs to other neighboring farms and lifestyle blocks. At
the end of the road was town, and from there they could only travel west out of
town to get to the highway that takes them out to the interstate. He could
catch them; he knew the surrounding area better than anyone. As he continued to
speed down the road his rage slowly faded as the effects of what he had
witnessed took hold. Jenny, her small body lying broken on the stairs, her
golden hair, stained red, fanned around her pretty little face. Her arms bent
at unnatural angles, how they got broken he didn’t want to think about. If they
made his poor baby suffer...no he couldn’t think about that. He wiped the tears
from his eyes. his poor baby. He had been driving back home from a trip down to the store
to get Jenny a new colouring book and some fancy pens from the craft store for
her 4th birthday. Amy from next door had been looking after her
while he had been out. It was supposed to only take an hour or two but he had
ended up getting caught up talking to Philip, a man who said he was out of town
waiting for some friends to finish up a job they were doing so they could hit
the road again. This was nothing new, the small township of Gullvern was always
getting new farm hands in for all the local farms. Wasn’t uncommon for them to
arrive and leave in groups. Tom had left town at about 11:36 AM, hoping to
arrive back home in time to catch the end of the lunch Amy would have made
Jenny. As the road had turned to gravel an approaching car had forced him to
pull over as it was traveling far too fast for the narrow roadway. He’d shouted
at them as they passed but all the passengers ignored him. Taking them for a
bunch of joy riding farm hands he pulled back onto the road and continued home.
Everything had looked alright at first glance, it was only as he pulled up outside
that he noticed the door was ajar. Jenny always was quick to run inside when
asked and had a habit of leaving it open. He’d gotten out of the truck and
across the porch, his keys jangling as he pocketed them. He had thought it a
bit strange that Jenny hadn’t run out giggling at the sound of his truck, but
as he nudged the door he thought maybe she was busy having fun with Amy. The
door didn’t move. He gave it a push and it pushed back a little, sounding as if
it was dragging on the door. He pushed again and went through the opening and
tripped over something lying in the entrance. He rolled over and looked at the
door and his blood ran cold. Amy lay on the ground, her “rock till you drop”
shirt stained a dark crimson red. He scrambled over to her and moved her hair
from her face. Her lifeless eyes stared back at him. Her shirt was soaked in
blood, the floor boards around her slick with it. The palms of her hands were
dried red, she hadn’t died instantly. She’d bled out. Then Tom was up and
running, shouting out for Jenny over and over. He’d raced around the first
floor. She wasn’t in her room, the lounge, the kitchen. He’d raced up the
stairs and stopped on the landing and broke down. His poor baby girl lay
sprawled at his feet, her hair wet with blood, her eyes staring blankly into
space. She was dead. His baby girl. Who did this! Who killed her? It then
dawned on them, the men in the car racing down the road. those b******s! He
didn’t want to leave Jenny again but they needed to pay. There were no police, this
was his to sort out. He had raced to his room and pulled the 12 gauge and the
ammo sack out the cabinet and ran to the truck. the truck crunched along the road, the engine making sounds
Tom didn’t like. “Come on don’t crap out now!” he yelled slapping the wheel.
The engine cut out for a second then a bang sounded from under the hood and
black smoke billowed out. He slammed on the brakes. “Screw it” he yelled. He
couldn’t let them get away, he must’ve been close now. He grabbed the 12 gauge
and reached into the back seats and rummaged around for the ammo sack. He felt
material under his fingers and grabbed it, pulling it into his lap. It felt
light in his grip and he realized he’d grabbed Jenny’s little pink bag. He gave
a little gasp as he realized she would never wear it again. He set it down
gently on the passenger seat, like it was made of fragile glass. He rummaged
round for the ammo bag and dragged it out. Without thinking he pushed it inside
Jenny’s bag and fiddling with the straps, threw it onto his back. He slammed
the car door and started jogging down the road, he could still catch them, he
had to. After 10 minutes of solid jogging he entered town. He asked
everyone he could find if they had seen a black car carrying all males speeding
through. No one had seen anything, but he suspected they were more concerned
about why a grown man was running around with a gun and a child’s backpack. He
couldn’t tell them why; they would try stop him. He was about to set off
towards the highway when he heard a screech of wheels and the same black car
shot around a corner behind him. It barreled down the street as he unslung the
shotgun and aimed at the car, people around him screaming as he fired off his
first shot. The hood of the car took the shot and it swerved on the road. Tom
reloaded and fired a second time, the shot going into the hood again as the car
angled straight towards him. To late Tom realized they were aiming to run him
down. He went to move as the car moved beside him but instead of hitting him it
swerved to the side and after a brief moment he felt a stabbing pain in his
side as he fell to the ground. The shotgun spun from his hand. He couldn’t get
up his side was in agony, he’d been shot. Jenny’s bag on his back was propping
him up and he had a perfect view as Philip got out the car and approached him. “rough
luck Tom, you really were a nice fella. Shame you had to try act the hero. Oh well,
least you’ll be able to go see your little girl. One of the boys says she
screamed the whole time she was dying, horrible, horrible screams. Go comfort
her” and with that he aimed the gun at Toms head and pulled the trigger. © 2017 Zack Pearce |
StatsAuthorZack PearceNelson, Tasman, New ZealandAboutHey all, I'm a young writer who's decided to share my stories with the world, one word at a time. This will be a learning experience for me so I'd welcome feedback! Also, I'm doing a challenge wit.. more..Writing
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