Thank you

Thank you

A Story by ZackSnow9
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Blood in and blood out call. I like that. A simple mix of Death and fight. Delicious. My girl says this a the time. It's only because I feed her. But when I say delicious. Its only because I tricked h

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I'm a 9 year old lover and I am proud of it.
I'm a 7 year old lover and I am proud of it.
I'm a 2 year old manager and I am proud of it.
Older grown up vistors asks, where In the hell
have we just ended up, and where are their parents?
A woman wakes out of it, 1 woman and sees the
parents of these children back in the real world
As they yell, "our kids has been taken away last night
we can't find them."
" I know where they are." "What happened to them?"
"They're prostitutes." 1 man gets angry and grabs his gun
while they in the moment finds out that she was
the way to get their children back. Before he would even
listen to get the news he shoots her dead, "you crazy witch.'
"NOOOOOOOOOO."
Then they try to attack him but he shoots
them all and leave out the school
and hops back in the car with his new girlfriend and
real son. "Yea. Our lucky day.
Something happened to the kid. I guess now
All we have to do is worry about burying the mother.
I guess the devil does have a way of helping
and saying thank you after all. Ready to go sport?"
They speed off and left everything behind wasted.

© 2014 ZackSnow9


Author's Note

ZackSnow9
If this is not as clear as I hope to, did in just a few, let me know please.
I'm trying to shorten the stories a lot more for
A better value for where people could review and definitely comment a lot more.

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ZackSnow9
ZackSnow9

New York, NY



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I'm zack. A cool lay back person. Ridgeway, can of paint, muscling weights; living the great drawings of an artist interested in the people who believes, sees, fills, understands and obeys God kind.. more..

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