My post breakup lyrics

I randomly wrote this after a breakup a month or so ago... No idea why I just kinda wrote stuff down without knowing what I was writing and BAM: Crappy lyrics. And tips appreciated

Sitting there with your blank face on

I try to talk but you are gone

You're here in person, like the rest

But gone in spirit, best of best

We fly so high, but surely crash

Into the sea, a loveless bash

You say you’re here but you are not

You put my heart out on the spot

We fly so high but surely crash

Into the sea, a mental lapse

A few short words, a plea perhaps

As all my dreams begin to snap

Said i love you, I'm everything

My heart was hanging from a string

You took it, twisted, start with that

I was a fool, on me you spat

Maybe you thought you were in love

You tried to push you tried to shove

You wanted to believe in me

But gave up hope, now I can see

We fly so high, but surely crash

Into the sea, a loveless bash

You say you’re here but you are not

You put my heart out on the spot

We fly so high but surely crash

Into the sea, a mental lapse

A few short words, a plea perhaps

As all my dreams begin to snap

Now I may seem not much to you

You claimed to love me through and through

The day we broke, the day I snapped

The day you left my mind uncapped

You would not talk you would not stay

And I was there not much to say

I want to scream, but not too loud

My mind encased inside a shroud

You did not care, unaffected

Me and happy, not connected

You so happy, me neglected.

We fly so high, but surely crash

Into the sea, a loveless bash

You say you’re here but you are not

You put my heart out on the spot

We fly so high but surely crash

Into the sea, a mental lapse

A few short words, a plea perhaps

As all my dreams begin to snap

Author's Note

Any tips? First thing I have ever really written and I was not in my right mind so its pretty choppy I am sure