My first hug

A summer experience

My first hug was like a dream. Felt like the time has stopped. I did whisper in her ear
"is that a dream?"
I just hug her at a summer night. I wanted to say good night that way but she kept me there and said.
"little more....its so strong".
I smiled, I was happier than ever, my first hug make a girl so happy. I was proud. I could stay there all night. Then a few stupid words came out of my mouth.
"It's late... You have to sleep"
Morone... You thought that just a hug will win a heart...
Although it felt like this...
"OK" she said but she squeezed me harder till I couldn't breathe. And then again she said
"I'll count to three".
The three seconds that put an end to my first hug.
1...2...3...she released my back from her two sweet hands and said goodnight.
That way I spend my first hug.
At a cool summer night close to the sea, talking first time in English with a girl from another country.

Author's Note

Hey I'm not good at English so if you want you can correct any mistakes I made 🙂

Reviews

[Intothemilkyway]

That's so sweet. It's like your first kiss but this time with a hug.

[Zeden]

Yea I will not forget that moment. Thank you for reading my writings🙂

[Haley]

This is great and definitely reminds you of what it's like to be caught in a warm embrace!

[Zeden]

Oh I'm glad that you like it. I appreciate that you stopped in my writings and took a look. 😃

[WH]

Hae.
I really like the simplicity in this piece. I mean it's just a hug but you've made it really memorable. I couldn't help but notice you said that you spoke English for the first time with this girl. Does this mean that English is not your first language?
There are however a few grammatical errors. I.e.
Line 4 should read ' I just hugged her'
And line 7 should read "my first hug made a girl so happy"
And the third line from the bottom I think should read "that's the way I spent my first hug"

[Zeden]

Thank you so much.😃 You're right.
Yes my first language is Greek.
I'm from Greece, you;
I have a poor vocabulary. I learned English from songs, movies and a bit from school. I have to study more😀. Thank you again

[WH]

We'll am from Africa

[Zeden]

Wow niceee😀. First time I'm talking to someone from Africa. We are close🙂

[WH]

Close to what?😂😂😂

[Zeden]

Let's say that Crete the Greek island is close to Africa 😅

[WH]

😂😂😂😂 alright