Another angel

Another angel

A Poem by Zeden
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A guitar song I never finished

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Another angel lost from my hands reminds "hey, you're used to bad ends.

Yes I'm used to the pain girl and I don't feel the rain falling.

Thought I found a shiny pearl, looks like was just an empty shell...im sorry.

Haunted by feelings every night,
buried deep in my darkest side.

Punch the wall to feel alive
Blood on my hands, tears like I'm five.

And another angel lost from my hands reminds me... "hey, you're used to bad ends".

But I'm dead among deads and I don't need anyone who says...

"You're a good guy" huh.. Who cares;
When that s**t inside me burns...

And another angel lost from my hands reminds "hey... you're used to bad ends.

© 2020 Zeden


Author's Note

Zeden
This is a song I wrote 3 years a go and I added some guitar melody. But I never finished it like many others. I'll be happy if you correct any mistakes I did cause I'm not good at English.

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WH
I can see from your song that you are probably still hurting from the heart aches of perhaps a bad relationship and you probably still have some regrets.
It's a wonderful piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


WH

4 Years Ago

Sorry to hear that. You'll find someone better
Zeden

4 Years Ago

It's OK thank you😄. I hope to be that "someone better" for someone else too
WH

4 Years Ago

😊 welcome

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Zeden
Zeden

Kavala, Greece



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I'm 25 years old. I loved to write stuff since I was a kid. I'm the type of person who will start to write something with passion but I'll stop at the second page. I'm not good with English but I'm tr.. more..

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