When I'm With You

A dedication to my love, when I am with you I'm blind to all else yet have never seen myself clearer all the same.

When I'm with you
You're all I see
When I'm not with you
You're the only one
The only one I want to be with me

If I didn't have you
I don't know what I would do
Let alone be,
Be without you

You're my everything
You're my world

You see right through me,
Right through my shield
When we first met I wasn't sure
But you climbed my wall of bricks I placed to protect myself from this world
The hurt and agony which pored in.

I let down my guard, only to let you in
When we are together I put it back up
So it's just you and me

So can't you see?
You're the only one I want to see
You're the only one I want to be with me
You make me, me
You not only make me who I am,
But you're helping me become who I want to be

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...:).........

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I don't know why this hasn't gotten any reviews its beautiful :)
I loved this it was so romantic and sweet, and really comes from your heart.
Its deep and very heartfelt :)
Have you showed your love this piece?
I bet she would love it :)
Great write :)