Morale

When my dream was wide awake
our connection had improved
Satellite feed of a face,
looked an awful lot like you
There was static in a smile
200,000 miles away
Lunar phases of ourselves
system error, detonate
all urgent messages I send
First contact offered a choice
Malfunction and then restart
to celebrate without rejoice
Morale is strong,
my faith is gone

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Malfunction and then restart
to celebrate without rejoice (rejoicing)
Morale is strong,"

High in morale, urgent in messages. Bravo................

[Zakari Schmidt]

Hey thank you for reading and the nice review Sami

[Sami Khalil]

Hey. You are welcome. ......:)..........

[Richard]

it's a fine poem

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................