Summer Bound

Today I walked home, with the scent of freedom under my wings.

Like a new freshly made sunrise, peeking over the beautiful mountaintops

I was finally summer bound, wiping away the worries that once robbed my soul.

Wiping away the stress I once felt, prior to this.

I was home, and to stay I was on cloud nine.

As I wake to the orange and yellow sunrise,  remembering the one over-populated life,

I call my own. Walking to the beach my footprints imprinting in the sand, the breeze kisses my sun-kissed skin.

I cannot believe, I am summer bound like a group of dolphins doing their morning dance.  

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

such a picturesque view of summer. well written.

[Falling Leaf.]

Such beautiful images! A couple of things I would change, though. "...remembering the one over-populated life, I call my own." I don't think there should be a comma there. But, there should be one in between "beach" and "My footprints." The comma after believe towards the end also seems to be unnessecary. Just something to think about.
Other than that, lovely! Well penned!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Reading this made me happy for you........enjoy it and write!

[Dream Hunter]

This captures pure bliss just right. It's really beautiful; i love your descriptive words, like "sun-kissed" and "dolphins doing their morning dance." it has a soothing effect. :) the only thing i would like to point out is that "mountaintop's" in the second line of the poem should be changed to "mountaintops". overall, good work!

[Renée]

Beautiful moment !