Truth Be Told

Why we do what we do...

 

                                    Truth Be Told

 

I hate roller coasters, the sudden drops, the constant jerking

of confused limbs, the nauseas waves of excitement pounding

at my senses, the thrill of the exit; when it finally finishes.

 

I hate sky diving when the air is cold, the wind blowing east

taking it’s toll. The crush of my legs when I tuck, drop, and

fold, relieved, yet disgusted…truth be told.

 

Bungee jumping; now that was something, a hell of a rush,

truly banging. I hated that to, too much like a hanging.

 

Climbed a rock, to the top of it’s summit, impressed the hell

out of her, I disappeared to vomit.

 

Needless to say, I hated that too…But she’s wickedly hot, what

else could I do? 

 

                                       Yvette Shaw

Reviews

[odhiambo]

i totally love it.i hope you dint do all that

[Dorchadas]

So funny... I love the humour and the sincerity... mad me me smile out loud... and yeah you can smile out loud ~grins~ Class.

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

haha yea sometimes it's a good thing though at least it breaks us out of our shell and we try new things that we never wanted to because were so scared or just don't like to. so i kinda take that into mind when i get into someone and act all goofy at first

[she makes me weird]

haha I have to admit, this made me laugh. It leaves me with a smile though, making me think of all the things I've ever done for someone...things I didn't like or wouldn't normally do. This is a simple piece with so much meaning. I really enjoyed.

[Michelle Lea]

Wow, you are so wonderful with your usage of words. I loved this write!! She must have been wickedly HOT!! I totally understand (-:

[Flow]

Oh the things we do in the name of beauty and love, how we push our limits just to experience those moments with the ones who steal our hearts. Wonderful write, loved it~

[Angel's Lady]

Oh snap! I get this! And I've been there! OMG. Yes! Scared to death of heights, but I went up on the world's highest sky coaster! haha For HER! haha Great job! You made me smile and you made me feel it! Terrific write!