Evil Beauty

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I fall for you
I fall for your beauty
As if it break through,
But you're wicked inside.
I loss my mind, and I can't denied
That I'm blind, Blinded
By your beauty that is so innocent,but
Yet so Evil, as if it feeds you.
Your soul is a black hole, taking me in.
Take me for a ride, to your darkest thoughts.
I wish I can hide from it all, but in the end can't
Deny this plot.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

You did a smart job, describing a beauty that got you to fall in love; but which you later found its hurting part. Perhaps the woman in question is not as fair as her mere skin... Sir, I guess you did a mistake in the every use of the word 'DENIED". The supposition should be DENY.,

[Humberto Contreras]

Oh yeah, I did see that I'll change that, And thanks

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

You're welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Need some Santana music and the poem would be perfect.
"Your soul is a black hole, taking me in. "
Beautiful woman and darkness steal our visions and thoughts. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Humberto Contreras]

Thanks for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.