Life
A Poem by
Yusuf Qaizar
There is chaos
And then there is peace
What's in between
Is Life.
© 2015 Yusuf Qaizar
Author's Note
Reviews appreciated.
Reviews
Super short but it gets you thinking...and that is successful :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Spot on, Yusuf! Concise, true... There is really nothing else to say, it is all there... :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Spot on, Yusuf! Concise, true... There is really nothing else to say, it is all there... :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you :)
Hit the nail on the head! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Hit the nail on the head! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Short sweet and to the point, the best form of poetry some say! I enjoyed it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short sweet and to the point, the best form of poetry some say! I enjoyed it.
hmmmm.......now that is an open door for looong time discussions....
Posted 10 Years Ago
hmmmm.......now that is an open door for looong time discussions....
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
And they are welcome
And between chaos and harmony, there is life and life can intertwine with both. And that is what life is, a roller coaster of chaotic movements followed by peaceful motions and vice versa. Very well put in a concise manner.
Posted 10 Years Ago
And between chaos and harmony, there is life and life can intertwine with both. And that is what life is, a roller coaster of chaotic movements followed by peaceful motions and vice versa. Very well put in a concise manner.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
True. Life is not purely chaotic or completely peaceful. Its a mix of both, something in between.
Bravo!!!
excellent poem........
i loved it!!!
:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Bravo!!!
excellent poem........
i loved it!!!
:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much.
This one is just excellent Yusuf :)
We all are at war with one thing or another and if nothing then with our innerself
Posted 10 Years Ago
This one is just excellent Yusuf :)
We all are at war with one thing or another and if nothing then with our innerself
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. The real war is the war within. :)
Wow! In very few words you summed up everything about life (Y)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Wow! In very few words you summed up everything about life (Y)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
These are two extremes of life we can never achieve.
I agree. Life is our chosen road. Can be a good one or bad? It is decision. You have said a lot in the short poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
I agree. Life is our chosen road. Can be a good one or bad? It is decision. You have said a lot in the short poetry.
Coyote
10 Years Ago
Thank you. Yes it is and its not monotonic either.
10 Years Ago
You are welcome.
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Added on March 2, 2015
Last Updated on March 22, 2015
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Yusuf Qaizar Jabalpur, Madhya Pradesh, India
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I'm a young aspiring writer, learning about literature and I hope one day my words would make a difference to this world.
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