Life
A Poem by
Yusuf Qaizar
There is chaos
And then there is peace
What's in between
Is Life.
© 2015 Yusuf Qaizar
Author's Note
Reviews appreciated.
Reviews
Super short but it gets you thinking...and that is successful :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Spot on, Yusuf! Concise, true... There is really nothing else to say, it is all there... :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Spot on, Yusuf! Concise, true... There is really nothing else to say, it is all there... :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hit the nail on the head! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Hit the nail on the head! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Short sweet and to the point, the best form of poetry some say! I enjoyed it.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Short sweet and to the point, the best form of poetry some say! I enjoyed it.
hmmmm.......now that is an open door for looong time discussions....
Posted 9 Years Ago
hmmmm.......now that is an open door for looong time discussions....
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
And they are welcome
And between chaos and harmony, there is life and life can intertwine with both. And that is what life is, a roller coaster of chaotic movements followed by peaceful motions and vice versa. Very well put in a concise manner.
Posted 9 Years Ago
And between chaos and harmony, there is life and life can intertwine with both. And that is what life is, a roller coaster of chaotic movements followed by peaceful motions and vice versa. Very well put in a concise manner.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
True. Life is not purely chaotic or completely peaceful. Its a mix of both, something in between.
Bravo!!!
excellent poem........
i loved it!!!
:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Bravo!!!
excellent poem........
i loved it!!!
:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much.
This one is just excellent Yusuf :)
We all are at war with one thing or another and if nothing then with our innerself
Posted 9 Years Ago
This one is just excellent Yusuf :)
We all are at war with one thing or another and if nothing then with our innerself
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you. The real war is the war within. :)
Wow! In very few words you summed up everything about life (Y)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Wow! In very few words you summed up everything about life (Y)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
These are two extremes of life we can never achieve.
I agree. Life is our chosen road. Can be a good one or bad? It is decision. You have said a lot in the short poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
I agree. Life is our chosen road. Can be a good one or bad? It is decision. You have said a lot in the short poetry.
Coyote
9 Years Ago
Thank you. Yes it is and its not monotonic either.
9 Years Ago
You are welcome.
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Added on March 2, 2015
Last Updated on March 22, 2015
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Yusuf Qaizar Jabalpur, Madhya Pradesh, India
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I'm a young aspiring writer, learning about literature and I hope one day my words would make a difference to this world.
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