Photo Day

Green, white

And savoury cream.

 

Funny moments

And a weird dream.

 

Transfixed in memories,

Laughing in untold amounts of energy.

 

Getting dizzy, dropping off

Being busy, talking on the phone

While the other person is alone.

 

Larry and Harry unite,

They fly off and reach their height

From a scary someone, running at the speed of light.

Reviews

[nono]

I love this poem, question though cause i think i understood what you were writing but i'm not sure...were you writing about how busy people are in there lives? I really like this poem very much though it's very nicely done.

[Y.Badr El Din]

-midnight_mask- this was created by another person you know who. and lol.

[Midnight_Mask]

I loved it =]
good work =D
And I love the lines 'Transfixed in memories, Laughing in untold amounts of energy' =P

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I like the surreal aspect~ and the formations of imagery elicited by cleverly placed words~