WHAT NO!

A Poem by Y.Badr El Din

Tick tok. Tick tok. Tick tok.

Sweat coming down my face.

Tick tok. Tick tok. Tick tok.

Nervous but without a trace.

Tick tok. Tick tok. Tick tok.

So much pressure.

Tick tok. Tick tok. Tick tok.

Time is like treasure.

Tick tok,

Temptation,

Sudden realisation.

STOP!

Face the front and be quiet!

© 2010 Y.Badr El Din

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Faye	Nice amount repitition. Posted 14 Years Ago Nice amount repitition. Rating /100

Y.Badr El Din

not really but the stress is too much sometimes (thankfully not this time!)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Midnight_Mask

lol. Is the tests that nerve racking for you?
I don't here the clock in the exam, too bussy failing =[
Good luck for tomorrows n good write btw, the repeating of the words drive an announce into the readers head (well at least mine) =/ but thats good. It makes the reader feel how your feeling.
Keep it up! =D