To Deep For Me!

I’m in pain

What more is there to gain?

Why do you go for me?

Can’t you see?

 

What a shame imbued with sorrow.

Regurgitate love.

Please lend me a hand to borrow,

Cause love isn’t there no more,

To me it’s only a chore.

 

One that is messy and wet.

I can’t swim in this pond

Too deep for my heart,

Yet it is in two,

And half died with you!

 

 

Reviews

[Midnight_Mask]

So sad ='[
very deep, I loved it =]
Good write, keep it up! =D

[Lucy Joan]

The sorrowful tone is so clear in your poem, it almost made me sad. XD I agree with the last person, i really like how you ended the poem. Nice.