Perihelion/Aphelion

Getting closer now

       Shining so bright

 Hotter then before

             With every minute passing you seem to be burning

 But now why are you tuning?

 

           That endless heat seems to be freezing

               As a star that you are

                        You seem to ellipse me 

                                     Every moment getting colder

               Till the next time we meet 

And everything will get warmer.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Y.Badr El Din]

Not many people think so! But thanks ^_^!

[Ruth]

This is wonderful!
A stunning poem for the image, there is a claustrophobic feel here too!
xx