Cry

Cry

A Poem by Ysabel Reyes
"

A short poem I made when I was lonely..

"

 

Sometimes I just want to cry

To let this tears fall by

To let my feelings fly

To set them real high

 

Emotions that keeps on holding

All the smiles and laughs I've been keeping

All I want is to be strong

Teach me how to keep going on

 

I can tell my heart's been hurt

Save me from this filthy dirt

Eyes that was clear was now a blur

You didn't even notice, you're insecure

 

© 2011 Ysabel Reyes


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To let this tears fall by
*These? This line threw me off a bit :p
But this poem had deep meaning, and it was a very nice write. I can relate. Sometimes it's tough trying to keep being strong, and being hurt is never easy to go through. Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is so sweet
i loved that :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was beautiful and totally relatable.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


the only thing i should tell you is that i would suggest you change "this tears" to "these tears" Other than that nice piece:) can u please send me a msg explaining the last line. thanks!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A really beautiful and sincere poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like a music piece. Nothing better comes to mind. It's too perfect.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am so in this spot right now! I can feel the depth to these words. They are penning what my heart is feeling. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A richly artistic piece composed with raw emotions that anyone can feel and perhaps express. I liked this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm quite a great poem, nice simple picture for it and title, nice simple lines, yet got the emotions and feelings written great, i liked this :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ysabel Reyes
Ysabel Reyes

Australia



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I'm Ysabel and I'm 16. I love writing. www.perfectlywonderstrucked.tumblr.com http://www.youtube.com/user/yssahbell more..

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