My breath running away

My breath running away

A Poem by Emmanuel Rosado
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the poem speak for itself

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curse!
curse myself!
why i did it?
and now i pay the price
oh soon!
oh they say soon!
but i enter the darkness
giving everything to the abyss
as souls pass me
i see myself
in the eyes of her
and i cry tears of empty hope
my blood turns to water
and my flesh crawl out like bugs
my mind scream at me
and my heart stab himself
my freedom has fly
and I'm chain 
chain to the rock of burden
and the devil is mocking me
my last breath spend on my last words
my last words spend on my final good bye
my final good bye on you
don't cry for me 
kissing your lips...
whit my eyes
and my breath...
is making it last stand
there no.......
....noth......
...

© 2010 Emmanuel Rosado


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This is a really good poem, it sounds to me to be more of people dying for a sin, and knowing they are going to hell. So in the end they regret what they did... maybe that's not it, but that is what I thought it meant.

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Emmanuel Rosado
Emmanuel Rosado

Carolina, Puerto Rico



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