I'm the lie

i can't describe how much this have made me cry cuz is true sometimes is better leave and forget

i lie to you

just to be whit you

i want my memory

to take me to a better place

"where did you ran off?"

i ran off tho chase after myself

"why did you do it?"

 "yes why did you do it?"

because i lie

i regret my choice

i regret everything

"but why?just tell us why!?"

where do you see the moon?

where does it shine in me?

i lie 

I'm not worth 

did you ever ask yourself what next after me?

"no!i never question it!you are the one for me!"

i was made to be alone

because when i need to rescue no one comes

but when they need rescue ....

I'm there

don't hear me cry

don't see me cry

don't smile

don't whisper my name

the more i want to forget this

the more it come back

the less i want to lie to you

the more i have too

"then why me!? are you afraid?"

  "yes why her?you b*****d of hell!"

fate put you to the test

and I'm a reject

 smile because you pass fate's test

i go back where i belong

in my.....

....memory....

Reviews

[Arganova]

The poem, when taken for just the words and all else is ignored, is a pretty good piece. However, its presentation does not do it justice. Imagine a wonderful painting being exhibited in a dirty, poorly lit room with a moth gnawing at the corner. Admittedly, I am a bit of a grammar/punctuation lover, and therefore a poem presented which uses these poorly does not appeal to me. I'd check for typos and fix them, use the correct number of spaces and capitals everywhere. These seem like meaningless things which should make no difference to the writing, but they really do- and just those little differences make a good poem into an amazing one.