Honesty

im not good writing english cuz i original speak spanish so i dont speak it or write very well and the poem is the honest me

honesty is what i seek

from the hills and the sand

the sand of mirrors

where i can not face it

in the lias i told

there a true

that im just....

another hidding honest men

where i can not stand my looks

where i can not see my face

oh where is this honest men i seek?

is in my heart 

but the mud of hatred cover it up

the sea of doubt is there

but one day 

i will be the same honest men

as there is

in my heart

Author's Note

everything

Reviews

[there is no more from m..]

:D amazing, grate poem :D i like it

[Samantha]

very touching, i enjoyed it. i like how instead of saying doubt you said 'the sea of doubt'. I would say work on word choice but i think this is good the way it is. Good job.