A man talking to his heart.

A man talking to his heart.

A Poem by Thoughts

In vague visions of dark nights
I have dreamed that joy departed
But awakened by a dream, of life and lights
My mind, had to walk on, but broken hearted.

Young people moves with your instinct
Old people banish and ignore you most of the time 
Wise people act as if you are extinct 
And the most hurted people who trusted your crime.

People talks about you as a bless
But I think you are a curse
Which may cause death 
And leads to the hearse.

But you always expect too high
And stay waiting for the same
But they look at you with a wry
As how weird you are and you get the blame.

People made wars
Because of what you feel
And some counted the stars 
And they try hard but never heal.

You made me  live a depressing and dark lifestyle.
You are the controller of human's life
Maybe I live with deep sorrow and a broken smile.
But I thank you daily for keeping me Alive.

So stop making us  their prey 
And stop letting them to pry into our personal life
And hang more on them day by day
And get hit from the back by a knife.

How do you feel when you are the biggest reason of suicide?
How many people failed because of you?
How many leaders lost their way and died without pride?
How many heroes lost their strength too?

Why did u get broken 
Stop of the acting 
You like a brogan 
 Which cannot be leftin.

Sometimes I wish you weren't able to feel
So we don't have to suffer
Or you are made of steel 
Or something we can shape like rubber.

So I am going to lock your door
Not to mess with my mind
And give it a chance to explore
Without being confined.

© 2015 Thoughts


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A powerful poem. Brought to life many questions and problems of this world.
"You made me live a depressing and dark lifestyle.
You are the controller of human's life
Maybe I live with deep sorrow and a broken smile.
But I thank you daily for keeping me Alive."
Government want fear to control the masses. When the people quit thinking. We are just sheep, waiting for the the slaughter. I enjoyed the poetry. Strong description and thoughts made the reader think. This is the best kind of poetry.
Coyote



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thoughts

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much man, yeah this is the problem, most of the people stopped thinking theya are just .. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did like it and you are welcome.



Reviews

Though the poet is very pesimistic , he indirectly ,he confesses that the heart revolves round the holistic activities of the human beings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A powerful poem. Brought to life many questions and problems of this world.
"You made me live a depressing and dark lifestyle.
You are the controller of human's life
Maybe I live with deep sorrow and a broken smile.
But I thank you daily for keeping me Alive."
Government want fear to control the masses. When the people quit thinking. We are just sheep, waiting for the the slaughter. I enjoyed the poetry. Strong description and thoughts made the reader think. This is the best kind of poetry.
Coyote



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thoughts

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much man, yeah this is the problem, most of the people stopped thinking theya are just .. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did like it and you are welcome.

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Added on October 1, 2015
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Cairo, Egypt



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