Life's Rhythm

Life grips tighter on the thread of my hearts strings

Caught in the moment where you appear

No more standing alone, your what life now brings

Every moment in my heart I hold dear

a beat now plays a sweetly discovered song

strummed with a harmonious tone

Forever to go on, nothing can go wrong

no more is my heart living in the arctic zone

It stays on key, balenced and at best

an uplifting beat has got me more progressed

Rhythm pounding to what I thought wasn't real

But you opened me up and made me believe

for this feeling is too good it's so surreal

but you got through to me, now a love has been achieved

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Fallen Angel]

wow love it..i think there are many people who can relate to this...i know i can. good write

[rockinmiley555]

i love how it gives such a detailed explanation about how your feeling and what love is. ♥

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very uplifting.. stunningly warm words flowing through of the impact of one heart to another.. balance is found between surreal and reality.. we need all spectrum of life to live, finding and feeling love around us. Loved the words:

Forever to go on, nothing can go wrong
no more is my heart living in the arctic zone
It stays on key, balenced and at best
an uplifting beat has got me more progressed

This is so lyrical.. loved it! Only error was balanced.. I don't grade on that but on the feel.. which you have some really great essence in this.. keep at it!!!