A Late Night

Sort of a Haku that somewhat rhymes and has syllabols that repeats 3,4,4,3,4,4,3,5. it's about waiting for someone which at first, seems stood up, but then they arrive there with roses. :)

All alone

Nothing to do

It's lonely here

Without you

The candle light

Is burning low

A love song's

On the radio

Still not here

It's getting late

What's going on

I can't wait

Then there you are

You're standing there

Dripping wet

With roses in hand

Author's Note

Hope you like it, Please comment. ^_^

Reviews

[deeps]

This one astounded me, I like the feel of this one and the flow. This is remarkable. You have talent.

[Vertigo]

loved the end...