Pain

I'm sitting here

Thinking about you

Missing you

Lonely

So depressed

I'm about to crack

Here comes the pain

I've got a knife

About to cut

Deeply

Since you're not here

My world's dark and gray

I'm one inch away

From my throat

Come save me

To late now

I'm laying on the floor

Now I don't have to worry anymore

Neither do you

Reviews

[Vivien Shapiro]

this is so painful to read but your really talented, i'm sorry you had to go through that, you're strong though!

[songstress]

it's startling, and real. I cannot imagine what was going on to make you feel this way. but, I can say you have a way with words and a way of just shooting through the heart.

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Wow, I feel like this all the time, I'm just waiting on the one to come and save me. I have tried the final cut, but I can never get deep enough. Breathing taking work!

[Isericanormal]

I feel this everyday. You captured it in words perfectly, all the pain and the loneliness, the heartache and depression, the anger and where you just let go, cuz now it wont bother you anymore.

I hate feeling like that but i do, and you have written this so well i was speechless at first becuz i've thought about doing the final cut myself but i'm waiting for him instead..

Great job tho. Really great.

[Milinda_Moon]

I LOVE it. I can understand this poem very much.Very deep.I really like it.Great job1