Goodbye.

a sad poem. Kind of hurt to write 'swell... i guess this is how my sister felt.

And i saw you,

Like you saw her.

In a different light,

I breathe air.

Goodbye my lover,

the pain always fills,

the tiniest gap.

And the knife will make kills.

I see you have forgotten,

our warm rosy memories.

But i just cant forget,

the way you said you loved me.

My almost lover,

a few weeks and i was gone.

but out love lasted for years,

it started when i was born.

Now i see your walking away,

im standing in the snow.

you look around and catch a glimpse,

at the girl you used to know.

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[serpent]

loss of love always seems to leave behind this void that is filled with pain and memories of those good times...a piognant write!
i guess its pain that leads us to write exquisite and amazingly beautiful pieces like this. Wonder if its actually a negative feeling..or rather an emotion..For me pain is an underrated emotion...and emotion well narrated in this piece.

[What happened to simple..]

ooh, I love this =)

'And i saw you,
Like you saw her.
In a different light,
I breathe air.'

really original combinations of ideas =D xx