The Sweet Sound of Heartache

I wrote this poem after one of my ex-boyfriends broke up with me.

I liked you,

You liked me.

My world was complete.

Until that storm,

You deeply caused.

My world turned gray,

More like black and blue.

I miss you so much,

Yet you don't miss me.

Everyone hears

My heart breaking.

I cry at night,

Fake a smile at day.

I wish you can see

The pain you caused me.

I like you,

You don't like me.

I am sadly disappointed,

My world is incomplete.

The storm you caused,

Broke my heart.

No one can re-heal,

The damage you have done.

Reviews

[Tamia123]

Sadly? Things like this happen all the time and to almost everyone. I loved the way you expressed it :) Good job!!!