You Said You Would Never Leave

Then why did you go...

Alone.

The concept I fear, Yet know so well.

I hate this feeling it kills me so,

To know I'm sitting here

Without you near.

Where did you go?

What happened to you saying..

You'll never be alone.

 

Why?

I think about it constantly now, with pain in my eyes. 

About what ever happened way back when,

Why I'm sitting here now

And my face is covered in tears.

What did I do?

What happened to you saying..

I couldn't live without you.

 

The end.

The dark end, that we all fear.

Nobody wants to face it alone.

To know I'm sitting here

Without anyone near,

As the knife slides from my hand.

Where did you go?

You could never hear me say..

I'll always be alone.

 

Author's Note

Newly extended~

Reviews

[shadow night]

wow this is how i feelt growing up knowing my mother left me and my brothers but left me truely alone ..... i love this it speaks to me deeply. not a lot of ppl can write like this and pass but you did an amazing job bravo.

[azeilc]

i think you dont need to extend this one cause its better read short since its a poem. beautiful words by the way :)

[Daydreamer54]

I like how dramatic some part sound. it's very sad and i can feel the empotions of sadness and lonliness. great write! ^^

[NightShade]

I would like to see this expanded. It's lovely but leaves me wondering how much more it could be. There's definitely the beginnings of music stirring in my head. Poignant lyrics always do something for me.

[Loner]

Its nice ..... but could make it a bit longer.

[Sarita]

its good...