Hard to Say.

Hard to Say.

A Poem by NeonWolves

What made us fade like this?

Hard to say.

We are blinded by lies.

Yet torn by the truth?

Hard to say.

Cut by shame.

Yet taunted by redemption?
Hard to say.

Twisted by fate really.
All one big game?

Hard to say.

© 2011 NeonWolves


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Welcome to Writer's Cafe!

I really like the concept of this poem! The choice of including repetition makes this poem very powerful, so bravo!

Precise but neat. I liked it :) Look forward to more work of yours.

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NeonWolves
NeonWolves

Mechanicville, NY



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Mrew~Im Kris. And yes, Im a girl. I have a obsession with anime and manga if you can't tell. I draw, write, sing and play the flute. I also tend to have a anxiety and depression problem. Heh...oh well.. more..

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