William and I

Should I continue?

I struggled to get out of his strong hands. The mans hands were pressed against my wrist. My neck hurt because he put his hands on my neck and squeezed. I could tell bruises were there. I was still gasping for air. The sweat ran down my face and some got into my mouth. I tried to kick and push but the man was to strong. The twigs underneath me poked my back. It hurt from when I rolled down the hill. Blood ran from my fingers down near my elbow which it dripped off onto the ground. My nails were brutally ripped of by the man. I wanted to cry but that would make me more weak. I was going to be free, alive or not. I ignored the pain in my leg for when I rolled down the hill and it hit a stump. I gathered up my strength and kicked him right in his stomach. He pulled back but  he tripped and fell. I pulled myself up. I began to run but I was  slow because I had to limp. I looked  behind me and saw the man getting up. I then pushed my leg forward and stopped limping and ran. Every time I put my foot on the ground pain shot from my ankle up to my thighs. I kept running. I heard a shot fire. Then, a quick sting in my other leg. The sting went away for a second but came back. I looked down at my ocean blue skinny jeans and stared at the back of my leg. There was a red stain and a hole in my jeans. The sting got worse and I fell down. I knew the dam in my eyes to keep the water from leaving was breaking. My eyes began to water, but I held it in. The man came towards me. I was laying on the ground staring up at him. He said unsavory words, "You little.." and then a cuss word. He wiped his bleeding lip. He lifted up his shaking hand, there was a pistol in his hand. "Shouldn't of broken up with me." I heard him mumble. I realized it was my ex.. "F*** You!" I managed to speak the words, my throat hurt from all the choking. He grinned. I saw his finger move to the trigger. I knew it was my last moments of life. I took a deep breath. But then, a shadow pushed my ex down. He fell on the ground and the shadow was punching him. My ex pushed the shadow and it fell back. I studied the life-saving figure. "William?" I said aloud. William, my brother, came and saved me! "RUN!" William screamed. His deep voice gave me chills. I got up and began to limp. I gathered up the pain and pushed my legs and began to run faster. My Vans were tore and gone from white to black. I heard a shot. My ex or William had been killed... I knew it. I then tripped over a stump and rolled down the another hill. Then, my head hit a rock... everything else was a blur. I passed out.

I woke up and all I saw was white. I took a deep breath. It smelled cold. I was in a hospital. I looked around to see a doctor and my mother looking over me. "Honey!" My mother began to cry. The doctor smiled. "It'll take her awhile to heal but I think she's going to be okay." The doctor walked out as my mother nodded. My throat hurt badly. "Mom.." My voice sounded like finger nails rubbing against a chalk board. I looked at my hands my fingernails were gone. But there was one thing I wanted to know first. "What happened to William?"

I LEAVE YOU AT THIS CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please put in the comment box if I should make a chapter book about this. There's nothing else to talk about in here? You may say. Don't worry.. I have a lot planned for this. But I need to know if you think I should continue?!

Author's Note

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