Givin' in

Really sad today... :'(

Breath of death against my skin

Touching, kissing, loving

Wanting what can't be his

I grasp to life

I will not let go

No matter how tight he holds

So tender to my hearts needs

Tempting pleasure

Burning need

Getting closer

Holding, grasping

Deaths breath against my lips

Sweet desire

Taking over

Loving every moment

I could give in

To live in his arms again...

What death can only give.

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I really liked this
good imagery
nice flow
passionate
good structure

fave line.... Tempting pleasure Burning need

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

It can be so easy to give in sometimes.

[AK]

Awesome! I was really pulled into the depths of this wonderful poem. So passionate, so mesmerising! I'm at loss for the right words..