Two Beautiful Stars and a Time Apart

Two Beautiful Stars and a Time Apart

A Poem by Alex Boyd
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About love and regret...

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Your smile is like flowers budding for the first time
As the sun rise for spring time right after winter ends
Beauty never been so sweet as the moon lay at your feet
God himself took his precious time in craving you
Oh sweet nightingale please let your voice be heard
Lovely melodies, wonderful poetry, you do sing

Your eyes is of fire burning with passion
As distance galaxies collide into each other
Forming wonders of the world that no one has ever seen
Or ever heard of, yet, still savior of many souls
Wanting the privilege to be granted of your presences
Many has ask to be part of and many shall never be

At last there is one close to your heart
A seedling that you did produce
And just like you she has all of your qualities
Your eyes of fire, Your smile that's a bouquet of flowers
The angles did rejoice on that day of her birth
Time was timid, Time was shy, and you did ask of him
"Would like to hold her?" She was fragile and till this day
Time only regret is that he never seized the moment....

© 2014 Alex Boyd


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Do you review poetry? I just revised something I had written last night "A Letter to Louisiana" which it is much better than the previous version, but next year were I writing a letter it could be better or much different, for I was not strict with myself in writing it and with the meter or form. This is lovely. Lovely symmetry and portrait of someone and a seedling that she did produce, a little girl child. Yes, this woman is a goddess the way you put it, when was she born? It sounds like a long time ago. It is not lovely to say so in so many words, but you have a gift of fire in the eyes of a lexicon, the words buoyed about like a buoy on ocean wave

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alex Boyd

9 Years Ago

Please be my editor and yes I do review poetry.... Especially when I like it... I've review some of .. read more



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You have a way with words, Alex! I love how you bring God into your poems. That makes your poems all the more stronger and beautiful. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So cool I really think its awesome! Your have such a way with your words! good job!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alex, that was nicely done. Much enjoyed it, nicely penned and imagery was quite beautiful and vivid. Given lines were really wonderful,
Your eyes is of fire burning with passion
As distance galaxies collide into each other
Forming wonders of the world that no one has
ever seen
Keep the good work coming.
Have a nice time writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Do you review poetry? I just revised something I had written last night "A Letter to Louisiana" which it is much better than the previous version, but next year were I writing a letter it could be better or much different, for I was not strict with myself in writing it and with the meter or form. This is lovely. Lovely symmetry and portrait of someone and a seedling that she did produce, a little girl child. Yes, this woman is a goddess the way you put it, when was she born? It sounds like a long time ago. It is not lovely to say so in so many words, but you have a gift of fire in the eyes of a lexicon, the words buoyed about like a buoy on ocean wave

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alex Boyd

9 Years Ago

Please be my editor and yes I do review poetry.... Especially when I like it... I've review some of .. read more

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