Do you review poetry? I just revised something I had written last night "A Letter to Louisiana" which it is much better than the previous version, but next year were I writing a letter it could be better or much different, for I was not strict with myself in writing it and with the meter or form. This is lovely. Lovely symmetry and portrait of someone and a seedling that she did produce, a little girl child. Yes, this woman is a goddess the way you put it, when was she born? It sounds like a long time ago. It is not lovely to say so in so many words, but you have a gift of fire in the eyes of a lexicon, the words buoyed about like a buoy on ocean wave
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Please be my editor and yes I do review poetry.... Especially when I like it... I've review some of .. read morePlease be my editor and yes I do review poetry.... Especially when I like it... I've review some of your work... Why you ask??? and once again please be my editor I highly need one... See I'm one of those writers who writes... It's hard for me to edit my own stuff because it always sounds right in my head lol
you do have a certain gift of fire Alex. Although a fast forwardness that every poem has to have,
it clings to the places it has to cling to effortlessly. Every poem, even the most complex,
has this sensitive, demanding attitude. "Read me and by reading me you will be better off". For those
few people of the world who write poetry, it is this infuse of some complex nutritional requirement.
But sometimes beauty secures it own path. Time makes sure of that.
A wonderful poem dear Alex. And thanks for allowing me to review it...dana
Many have (not has) ask to be part of and many shall never be..
I can't say more, it's just sooooooo wonderfully wonderful! ^_^
I request you to review my write-ups too as you yourself have the blessing of such a high-level talent..
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