At Least In The Waist

I wrote this to depict how far girls will go to be skinny.

At Least In The Waist

I hold my stomAch

I double over in pain

I'm sTarving myseLlf

I havEn't eAten in three dayS.

I wanT to be skINny

Like models on T.v.

I want boys to wHistlE

Then they look at me.

I retch With no result

I wAlk In a daze

I cannot eat

I haven't in fourteen dayS.

The blood rushes To my head

I begin to fall

I will eat today

I'm skinny now, after all.

Forty-one days

I finally lost weight

I'm now a size zero

At least in the waist

Author's Note

Pay special attention to what I capitalized.

Reviews

[~Dragon X]

Very creative! :D I love the idea of capitalizing the main message. It's a shame girls go so far to lose weight like that though :( only a few mistakes here and there. I think you meant to say "wretch" instead of "retch" but I could be wrong. :3
Again, great job! :D