StormA Poem by Celine HeathI would love some reviews on this as my first poem!!
And if you look closely enough
And if you peel of the mask That she wears in a desperate attempt To hide the flaws, to prove to you, Or herself, That she's ok even though it's clear that She's only acting tough And if you take the time to explore And if you delve deep into her mind- The mind she blocks from the rest of the world, Because she knows that it's dangerous, Highly fucked up, The next great tragedy waiting to happen, Wrecking, damaging, breaking you (crushing her even more) And if you really open those eyes And if you really step over the cracks and the wounds That have formed her new, paper, identity And leave scars, autographs from our "deeply loved" society On the inside, and out, Then you'll see a hurricane, a whirlpool of emotion ready to Lose control and strike at any moment; A Perfect Storm © 2016 Celine HeathAuthor's Note
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Added on December 13, 2016Last Updated on December 13, 2016 Tags: Poetry, depression, female, complicated, mind, thoughts, deep, sad, storm AuthorCeline HeathUnited KingdomAboutIt's ironic, how someone who writes doesn't know what to write here... more..Writing
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