LoveCraft

For that one person who has opened my eyes

Every Piece Of Block

Placed carefully

Now I wonder why?

Why have I scattered those blocks around?

This one girl that has come into my life

Without a scent

Without a Touch

Why Has she affected me SO much?

Why do I work so hard to make her smile?

Just this once I shall try

I shall try be myself

I shall keep the blocks scattered 

For that is who I am

Then One Day 

Hopefully...

We will build a bridge

Built from the feelings we have acquired

From that the city will be born.

Just this once I will Open the gate

Open the path to the truth

Will You Accept My Invitation? 

Reviews

[Myra]

Who wouldn't accept such a heartfelt invitation! Absolutely beautiful well done

[Bibliomancer]

Truly an emotional piece. I feel it's lacking in structure though, but I'm not one to judge harshly. Good work, and keep improving. :)

[The XYZ Writer]

That is a beautiful poem....I especially love the last few lines. Keep at it!!

[Minx-cat]

"We will build a bridge / Built from the feelings we have acquired" a beautiful, heartfelt poem. Love it.