The eye that has been blinded

The eye that has been blinded

A Poem by Yoshiyuki

Here I am
Here I stay
Watching the world
Oh what a s**t hole it is
Where is the paradise?
I may be blind
But even I can see
That the generations
Have been digressing
And for what?
Video games
Television
What pieces of crap
But what can I say?
For I am a gamer
My mind melting away to the non sense
For a blind man will always stay blind
Till he takes action
And strives for change

© 2011 Yoshiyuki


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Wow that was quite a poem. Filled with feeling, and power. But, and you don't have to take my opinion if you don't want to, could you take some of the um raw words out? I'm sorry, its your decision if you want to or not, just a suggestion. :) But really this is a great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 25, 2011
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Yoshiyuki

Kahului, HI



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