Forever on the Dance Floor

Not my usual poem but I thought I would try it out.

Lights twirl in the darkened air

Flicker by Flicker the orbs light up to their own pace

Flowing through the night sky 

Falling to the ground

The roar of its speed can be heard throughout the sky

With great precision they dance with one another

Never getting close to one another

Author's Note

Not my usual poem about sadness or pain. How did I do?

Reviews

[Etoiles]

I think it is kinda sad though?
I mean, the end where it says
'never getting close to one another'..?

Great write though :)

[Kim]

I enjoyed this, thought it was beuatiful.
Awesome write